We gave our general ideas of what we were planning to our other peers; at the funeral and then the camera pans down to the coffin and we see that the girl is inside alive, then it cuts to a man smiling at the funeral to say that he knows whats going on, but still a lot of the sequence is inside the coffin. The feedback we received was that there was too many aspects and that we should keep it more simple. We decided as a group to use this constructive criticism and narrow our idea down to more of a simplistic idea but still keeping high tension, which we thought would be better if it was all set in one space as the changing of surrounding could take away from the tension. Our idea which we will carry through to our production is a girl just trapped inside a coffin and the whole sequence will be filmed inside this coffin as we agreed that making it simplistic with a feature that is unknown to the character inside the coffin but that us as the audience are aware of from the beginning.
We also received feedback from our peers and the questioned what is going to happen during the two minutes which made us as a group think more deeply as to the storyboard and consider actual events that will fill the two minutes but also adding to the tension and pace of the sequence.
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